I'm interested to hear the vastly improved sound on the next demo.  You better make some physical copies this time :D Oh, btw: "Similar Artists Penis" ...oh boy, you've got some rough competition there.
Nice. As Blake said, the synths and acoustic guitars are particularly well played, nice melodies! You've got some really interesting ideas there. It's a good thing that you're not afraid to experiment. Of course, you'd need better recording equipment and a better mix if you wanted to make a proper album but this is not bad at all for a first demo, especially for a one-man project. From the musical point of view, it's quite unique and worth developing, for sure. Keep it up!